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Post HELP: I need somebody to revise my Spanish paragraph! - August 10th 2010, 03:43 AM

I'd really appreciate it if someone that is fluent in Spanish could edit the following paragraph below for me. We're doing a mock election for our Spanish class and I don't want to sound like an idiot in front of my class..

Soy la mejor candidata para presidenta de la clase porque tengo cualidades de una líder bien. Por ejemplo, soy dedicada, magnánima, y honesta. Este cualidades son importantes porque un presidente dedicado hará todos necesario completar un tarea, un presidente magnánimo dará mérito donde está esperado y aceptar responsabilidad para fracaso, y un presidente honesto no hará mal a la clase. Si hacerme la presidenta de la clase, ayudaré lose estudiantes con cualquier problemas tienen. También, escucharé a las sugerencias de mi compañeros improbar sus experiencias en la clase. Fui presidente de clase en grado nueve; entonces, tengo experiencia con liderazgo.
   
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Re: HELP: I need somebody to revise my Spanish paragraph! - August 10th 2010, 04:05 AM

I guess I can help.
I changed some things and added more to help you out.

Soy la mejor candidata para presidenta de la clase porque tengo cualidades para ser una buena líder. Por ejemplo, soy dedicada, magnánima, y honesta. Estas cualidades son importantes porque un presidente dedicado hará todo lo necesario para completar una tarea, un presidente magnánimo dará mérito y mejores resultados y aceptar la responsabilidad para fracaso, y un presidente honesto no le hará mal a la clase. Si me eligen como presidenta de la clase, ayudaré a los estudiantes con cualquier problema que tengan. También, escucharé las sugerencias de mis compañeros, mejorar sus experiencias en la clase. Ya que fui presidente en noveno tengo experiencia en liderazgo para ser presidente.


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Re: HELP: I need somebody to revise my Spanish paragraph! - August 10th 2010, 04:27 AM

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