Writing a Song

StevenStevenSteven · **Writing a Song -** June 2nd 2010, 04:09 AM

I'm writing a song on acoustic guitar. I can write music but not lyrics. It's a folkish song. The lyrics o have so far are as follows: 28 weeks separate me from the parking lot and the satelites/the smoke felt like air and the wind through my hair in the passanger seat of your cadillac/now things bigger than me are sand through my feet or the flatlining wave of a heart attack/so I'll bite my tungue or I'll hold my breathe for aminute or two until the blood comes back. Comments please

rionnalia · **Re: Writing a Song -** June 2nd 2010, 10:22 AM

i did heard of it but not the name

StevenStevenSteven · **Re: Writing a Song -** June 2nd 2010, 01:05 PM

Pardon????

TheSmileFell · **Re: Writing a Song -** June 3rd 2010, 06:56 AM

I like it. Sounds good (: I wanna hear when you are done

Em0ti0nallyUNSTABLE · **Re: Writing a Song -** June 5th 2010, 12:54 PM

I second Gummy. I would love to hear the song when you finished it. The lyrics sound great, Jacob. Just keep at it. No one gets it their first try, you just need to pick yourself back up and try again... but in your case, these lyric are good

You inspired me to write again too

Thanks, and hope to hear the song in the future!

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rionnalia Offline Member Welcome me, I'm new! * Age: 27 Posts: 14 Join Date: May 21st 2010	Re: Writing a Song - June 2nd 2010, 10:22 AM i did heard of it but not the name

StevenStevenSteven Offline Member Welcome me, I'm new! * Name: Steven Gender: Trans Location: Chicago Posts: 13 Join Date: October 11th 2009	Re: Writing a Song - June 2nd 2010, 01:05 PM Pardon????

TheSmileFell Offline Member Average Joe *** Name: Kori Gender: Female Location: Usa Posts: 109 Join Date: March 2nd 2010	Re: Writing a Song - June 3rd 2010, 06:56 AM I like it. Sounds good (: I wanna hear when you are done

Em0ti0nallyUNSTABLE Offline Banned Junior TeenHelper **** Age: 25 Gender: Male Posts: 218 Join Date: April 30th 2010	Re: Writing a Song - June 5th 2010, 12:54 PM I second Gummy. I would love to hear the song when you finished it. The lyrics sound great, Jacob. Just keep at it. No one gets it their first try, you just need to pick yourself back up and try again... but in your case, these lyric are good You inspired me to write again too Thanks, and hope to hear the song in the future!

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