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April 29th 2012, 02:26 AM
Not nightmares of monsters
but nightmares of me of what I do to my self how I destroy my self more then any monsters could not nightmares of monsters but nightmares of me of cutting of the road I don't want to go down but I cant seem to stop my self not nightmares of monsters but nightmares of me of taking my own life of hurting so many people but I want to so bad not nightmares of monsters but nightmares of me Speak softly and carry a big stick
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Silently falling.
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April 29th 2012, 02:31 AM
I like the repetition in this.
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April 30th 2012, 04:45 AM
I like the repetition as well; I've done that a few times before in my poetry, too. I like it a lot, it was very well written.
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April 30th 2012, 06:47 AM
beautifully written... i couldnt have said it any better myself...
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