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Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - May 23rd 2012, 07:29 PM

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This is my Avenged Sevenfold fan fiction. I've debated on putting it on TeenHelp, just cause I didn't think a lot of people would get into it. Fan fictions aren't everyone's cup of tea. But I figured I'd get a lot more input and feedback this way.
Anyway, rather than deal with putting a bunch of long chapters up here, I've decided to just give you the link:
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It's really triggering, and heavily centered around self-harm and abuse.
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - May 24th 2012, 07:27 PM

I shall have a look when I finish reading the book I am currently on. I am not a die-hard Avenged Sevenfold fan, but I am sure your writing will be interesting nonetheless.


"Ignore the ramblings of the ignorant, and step on or over their crumpled bodies as you make your way to the top of the mountain. Eat upon their flesh for fuel, and, through your determination and will, banish them to obscurity and a life of complacency and self righteousness that is the hell in which they live"

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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - May 24th 2012, 08:20 PM

Well, that means a lot to me :3


   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - May 24th 2012, 11:27 PM

Your story is amazing! I've never really been into anything romance related, but your story is an exception. There's so much more in it, and I found it really interesting. I can't wait to read more.


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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - May 25th 2012, 07:05 PM

Awwh thank you (: I'll be updating sometime within the next couple days... hopefully


   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - May 25th 2012, 10:38 PM

Updating within the next half hour.


   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - May 26th 2012, 02:47 AM

I'll read the update as soon as I can


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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 1st 2012, 10:46 PM

I know a lot of you aren't reading this, but if anyone's gotten that far, I've done chapter 17 but I'm having a lot of trouble with chapter 18. I don't usually like updating just one chapter at a time, but it could be a long time before I do any more. Should I upload the 17th chapter?


   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 2nd 2012, 01:20 AM

Yes, please! I've read all of what you've posted so far and I love it. Maybe we can give you some ideas for the rest or just motivation, if that's what you need XP


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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 2nd 2012, 10:11 PM

I'll be home tomorrow so when I get home I'll update :3 with this chapter, it's... It's not like I don't know where I'm going, I just don't know how to get there :/ I'll be there eventually haha. I do appreciate you offering ideas and help though, if I need them I will definitely ask xD


   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 4th 2012, 11:36 PM

when i saw the title i started singing the song lovveeeeeeeee A7X. but, my brain needs to work on huckleberry finn, so ill read it later when i need a break C: cant wait to read ittttt if its A7X, it HAS to be good


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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 6th 2012, 01:28 AM

You're now my favorite person in the world No one seems to know that song xD don't hesitate to tell me what you think when you do read it (:


   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 8th 2012, 06:27 PM

WOO! im a favorite person but that song is on their Nightmare CD, so why wouldnt people know it??
but anyway... i only read the first chapter so far, but.....
i really like the charachters names. theyre pretty creative. (i really like Yolanda, and it reminded me of Nwanda from the Dead Poets Society yes, im kinda a big nerd :P ) i also liked the Panda thing xD opens up with humor. not bad. and i like how you kinda put in just a touch of suspence right off, making the reader question when Raelene gets slightly afraid when she realizes she has to go home. same goes for when she prolongs going home and checks for vehicles. it clued us in that something was wrong at home, and forshadowed what was going to happen. and the ending of the chapter was good too. it wasnt too much of a cliffhanger; just enough to make me want to know what happens later. even though naturally i want to know what happens ill read the reast later though, since im super hungry


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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 9th 2012, 01:26 AM

finished.... I WANT MORE there were a few grammar errors that bugged me, but other than that, i LOVED it. when i was getting bored with the kissyness, you brought in interesting stuff. and you didnt put too much action in to leave little juice for later on. those are two really good things. i really enjoyed it and i want moooooorrrrrreeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!


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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 9th 2012, 11:48 PM

I love how I'm her sister and she won't let me read it. >.e
   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 10th 2012, 03:24 AM

^I'll let you read it when you take me off your ignore list. xD

GoneBeyondRepair: D'awh thanks, hon (: makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm really glad you liked it.


   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 10th 2012, 04:33 PM

but tof course i liked it<3 tiz luvly :3 now i just want more.


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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 13th 2012, 04:25 AM

I've had writer's block so no news on an update anytime soon.


   
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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 17th 2012, 03:57 AM

Possibly an update tonight.

EDIT: Updated til chapter 19. Working on Chapter 20 right now.(:



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Re: Tonight the World Dies (fan fiction) - June 24th 2012, 03:29 AM

woo! cant wait to read C:


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