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Breathe~me

December 10th 2012 12:26 AM

Cutting Poem...

Whispers of the dark,
Emotion left as a mark,
All over the arms and hands,
Not to be substituted by rubber bands,

Happiness is to be seen far away,
Though til i find it;the ground i lay,
Forever the use of a metal treasure,
Forever becoming a painful pleasure

I got bored so I wrote this... *)

Validity

December 10th 2012 12:28 AM

Re: Cutting Poem...

It's amazing, I love this, and it stirred me deeply!

Jay.

Tigereyes

December 10th 2012 01:07 AM

Re: Cutting Poem...

This is really good! Love it

Ennui.

December 10th 2012 01:30 AM

Re: Cutting Poem...

This is well-written and something to be related to!

Celaena-Sardothian

December 10th 2012 02:43 AM

Re: Cutting Poem...

Quote:

Originally Posted by xGothicXvampireXeternityx (Post 975579)

Forever the use of a metal treasure,
Forever becoming a painful pleasure

These last two lines are my favourite, but you wrote the whole thing really well! I loved it!

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