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It's too late now. - December 26th 2012, 07:57 AM

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Heart full of pain, tears fall like rain
so hard to maintain
I'm going insane!

laying in bed, thoughts fill my head
the words have been said and the blood has been shed
all of this dread, I just want to be dead

I put up a fight, but you were all right
this is why it ends tonight
I lose sight, my throat gets tight
open my eyes and see a light

I hear a cry, right where I lye
why did you die? why didn't you try?
I want to reply, just a goodbye
it's too late now
I'm in the sky




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Re: It's too late now. - December 26th 2012, 11:56 AM

Wow. This is really powerful.


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Re: It's too late now. - December 26th 2012, 01:33 PM

my toes are tingling from the ending... and my eyes are welling up with tears... woah. This is a brilliantly powerful poem... but i feel it. well done


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Re: It's too late now. - December 26th 2012, 07:55 PM

This is so powerful. I love it.







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Re: It's too late now. - December 28th 2012, 01:27 AM

This is amazing! The second stanza is my favorite.


   
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Re: It's too late now. - December 28th 2012, 06:03 PM

This really was a powerful poem. I enjoyed it quite a bit.


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Re: It's too late now. - December 29th 2012, 04:19 AM

This is amazing! It really made me think twice about how to treat others!


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Re: It's too late now. - December 29th 2012, 04:21 AM

I love this, keep writing <3

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Re: It's too late now. - December 29th 2012, 09:26 AM

This is awesome...I loved it.
   
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Re: It's too late now. - December 30th 2012, 03:35 PM

Thank you all!! <33


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Re: It's too late now. - January 5th 2013, 06:25 AM

This is amazing. Keep writing girl.

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Re: It's too late now. - January 5th 2013, 07:18 AM

This is so powerful, and brilliant! Keep writing, and stay strong <3
   
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