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I'm Not Who You Think I Am
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I Want To Be An Angel -
January 12th 2009, 10:29 AM
I want to be an angel
To wash away my sins Wash away the memories Of unforgettable things I want to stop the pain I feel The unrelenting tears To stop the harm I cause myself Protect me from my fears If I was an angel I could just fly away Not watch him hurt me All those planned out days I could just hide away I’d never see him grin Never hear him tell me that I’d be better thin Never had to feel his touch Never had to bleed If I was an angel My soul would be freed [x] Even though I'm the sacrifice, You wont try for me, not now, Though I'd die to know you love me, I'm all alone, Isn't something missing? Isnt someone missing me [x] Baby, i want you to be my superman.  |
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Re: I Want To Be An Angel -
January 12th 2009, 10:39 PM
Your description was beautiful. If you decide to go back through and edit, I would add in your punctuation at the end of your lines and stanzas.
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Re: I Want To Be An Angel -
January 13th 2009, 01:44 PM
punctuation is a must. hee, just letting you know that you have to put in punctuation, to help the poem flow better
You are beautiful just the way you are.
Looking like a fallen star. Don't listen to what people say. They don't know the real you, anyways. |
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I'm Not Who You Think I Am
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Re: I Want To Be An Angel -
January 16th 2009, 11:05 AM
Thanks again.
When get some free time and remember will add in punctuation, x [x] Even though I'm the sacrifice, You wont try for me, not now, Though I'd die to know you love me, I'm all alone, Isn't something missing? Isnt someone missing me [x] Baby, i want you to be my superman. |
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They'll never know.
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Re: I Want To Be An Angel -
January 16th 2009, 11:06 AM
That is amazing. It actually made me tear up (in a good way) because I can relate.
You were the angel of my life, taught me to be free Now I'm a stranger in your eyes. |
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