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Burst of anger - January 17th 2015, 10:32 PM

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This anger I have
Boils my blood
The surge I feel
I can't hold it back
Its control I lack

I am ready to snap
I feel overwhelmed
I've been pushed too far
I've bottled everything up
The lid will blow
And the bottle will erupt

I feel all this pain
There's no pushing it back
I can't pretend it's not there
I can't pretend I'm not scared
I am a wreck
A miserable person
A paranoid mess
In total distress

It burns
Under my skin
The poison spreading within
It needs to be released
I need to slice my skin
Draw the poison out
And let my healing begin

I need to watch it drip
See the colour
See the drops
See my blood that rots
Feel every cut
Count every line
Precision cutting
Is my peace of mind

There is no pain
Just carvings near my veins
Just my blood seeping out
There is no doubts
Only stains
Just blood and poison
Fighting its way out.

That feeling
Your first cut
That sight
First line of blood
Showing you have some fight
Dripping down your arms
Down your legs
Not even a tear was shed.
Just blood over your bed.
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Re: Burst of anger - January 17th 2015, 11:12 PM

This is really good!

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Re: Burst of anger - January 18th 2015, 12:52 AM

This is really vivid.

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Re: Burst of anger - January 18th 2015, 12:59 AM

Good job! Thank you for sharing.


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Re: Burst of anger - January 18th 2015, 03:40 AM

I really like the fourth stanza and I also like how you compared anger to a bursting bottle.

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Re: Burst of anger - January 18th 2015, 05:01 AM

This is good. I liked the sixth stanza best but the whole poem was nicely written.
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Re: Burst of anger - January 18th 2015, 12:19 PM

This is really vivid! I like the sixth stanza the best!

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Re: Burst of anger - January 19th 2015, 03:10 AM

I cannot even explain how much I liked this. It was vivid, it was emotional, it was intense. So great.

throw yourself into the unknown
with pace & a fury defiant.

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Re: Burst of anger - January 19th 2015, 08:47 PM

Thanks everyone, really nice comments.
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