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Unhappy The Lightless Room - March 20th 2015, 06:41 AM

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A lonely stool
A lightless room
And a girl who sits
And waits.

The sticky floor,
Her bloody body.
As tears drip down
Her face.

When out of the darkness
Comes a boy
With fluffy dark
Black hair

The boy that she loves
Yet she won’t smile
She can only sit
And stare.

He smiles and kisses
The top of her head
It only makes her
Cry harder.

And as he leans back
And punches her face
She swears the room
Gets darker.

He kicks and she screams
He pulls out her hair
He slashes at her with
A knife.

And when he says sorry
'He hopes she forgives him'
She wishes he'd just take
Her life.

He says not to worry
In time she'll forget
But she knows that he'll be
There tomorrow.

The boy that she love
Is now her worse nightmare?
And fills her life
With sorrow.


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Re: The Lightless Room - March 21st 2015, 05:00 AM

This is amazing c:


"Remember your loved and you always will be. This melody will bring you right back home." - Linkin park, The messenger. Stay strong everyone!! You are always strong enough to get through whatever life throws your way, no matter how hard it may seem.
   
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Re: The Lightless Room - March 21st 2015, 02:50 PM

This is a really good poem and it is very emotive.


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Re: The Lightless Room - March 21st 2015, 10:22 PM

This is really good!




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Re: The Lightless Room - March 23rd 2015, 01:41 AM

The second stanza is my favorite part.


   
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Re: The Lightless Room - March 23rd 2015, 03:13 AM

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'He hopes she forgives him'
She wishes he'd just take
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