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The Last I Love You - April 4th 2016, 05:58 PM

"You left" She said quietly, her voice was barely heard.
"Baby bou are you okay?"he said with a tone full of concern and guilt.
"You left." She said louder. "You left me behind for some reason and then you come back thinking it's okay."she hissed.
"You were the one that got away, what am I supposed to do when you're back. I was heart broken and you came back to fix it. The thing is I got over you"he widened his eyes.
"Are you w-with s-someo-one else?" He said eyes full of tears. It was the first time she saw him cry, and because of her, but she could do nothing to help him. It's been 2 years since they last talked, they walked past each other but every time she would see his eyes shine.
"I left because you were too good for me, I was never good enough. I didnt want to hurt you. I couldn't sleep that day, I kept looking at how beautiful you looked in your sleep, how amazing and kind you are. And I-I just thought that if I left you'd be better off without me. I went away, and I ch-changed for the better I always had your picture on my phone next to my bed, you were my goal. And when I came back here I...I wanted to give you this promise ring. B-but as long as you are happy with whoever you are with, I will be ha-ppy for you." He said shakily, with tears streaming down his red flaming cheeks. He looked at her last time with a big heartache and whispered
"I love you. Always and Forever"
And that was the last time she saw him in her life.


He came by, he said hi.
He left me, in my tears,
He never said GOODBYE



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Re: The Last I Love You - April 5th 2016, 03:51 AM

I could feel the emotion in this!


   
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Re: The Last I Love You - April 5th 2016, 04:19 AM

i love this. it captures the raw, terrible emotion of heartache from both sides of the relationship.

great work~ xx


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Re: The Last I Love You - April 5th 2016, 04:51 AM

Hey Bou!

I love this, it radiates emotion! We can definitely sense the heartache of both sides, as Jess said. Great work!


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Re: The Last I Love You - April 8th 2016, 07:26 PM

I agree, I like how it captures both sides.


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