Re: .:Poem About Suicide:. -
May 18th 2009, 05:20 AM
"I don't need a reason to stay,
But, can I have one not to die?"
I love the controversy of these two lines. By definition they mean the same thing, but when you add in the feeling you get from the lines it's something completely different. I can totally understand what you mean here, it's like that last cord of hope for this world. Great poem, fantastically written and good rhyming as well. Everything flowed nicely. I'd give this a 5/5 for sure.