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Love - December 6th 2016, 09:01 AM

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she tried to stay strong
and she had succeeded
or so she hoped.

she told herself that you weren't worth it
that she wouldn't bleed for you anymore.

but congratulations.
you pushed her over the edge.
you made her skin want something it shouldn't.
you made her pick up her blade again.

are you blind?
don't you see the hurt in her eyes when she looks at you?
obviously not.
would you stop if you knew what you were doing?
would you?
something tells me you wouldn't.

so here she is again
picking up her blade
tears running and drying down her face.
she presses it deep into her skin and slices it across.
she winces and bites her lip
but then sighs in relief when she sees her blood run down.

what have you done?
why have you done it?

what's really sad is that
when she sees the blood running down her leg
i see it too.
when she feels the relief
i feel it too.
because i am her.

i hope you're happy.
i really do.

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Re: love - December 6th 2016, 07:37 PM

I like how this came out!


   
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Re: love - December 7th 2016, 12:06 AM

I thought this was good. Thank you for sharing.


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Re: love - December 7th 2016, 01:18 AM

I can really understand the message in this. Thanks for sharing!
   
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Re: love - December 7th 2016, 08:49 AM

thank you everyone xx
   
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Re: love - December 11th 2016, 01:49 AM

Wow! This was really good! I really like how you wrote it



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Re: love - December 11th 2016, 02:56 AM

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what's really sad is that
when she sees the blood running down her leg
i see it too.
when she feels the relief
i feel it too.
because i am her.
was amazing and my favourite part.
   
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Re: love - December 12th 2016, 08:51 AM

Querencia. thank you x
   
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