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Moon. - April 22nd 2017, 04:42 AM

Could he pick your face out in a crowd?
Does he know your full name?
What color are your eyes, does he know?
Has he seen your hair down?
Has he heard you laugh?
He may have gone deeper inside you than anyone else has
but he doesn't know you.
He knew your body
but not who it belongs to.
I could follow your voice across the vastest land.
I know the exact shade of earth and soil that shines in your eyes.
I will always remember the gloss in your hair as the wind whipped it around your face
and the way you laughed.
Like you held the sun in your lungs.
Like you were a galaxy and your stars poured from your lips.
I am your moon.
We are forever part of each other.
He was an intruder
who burned as he passed through.
He is insignificant in your greatness.
He has no claim to any part of you
because you are not an object
and you cannot be owned.
   
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Re: Moon. - April 22nd 2017, 06:07 AM

I love this so much oh my god I felt so many emotions reading this thank you for this tbh


THE POINT OF SINGULARITY IS NOTHING AS NOTHING BEGAN EVERYTHING
PULSING IN THE EXPAND CONSUME WITHOUT BARRIER OR BORDER
IT IS DARK BECAUSE IT IS THE DARKNESS IT IS OVER BECAUSE IT IS THE END
THERE IS NO SENTRY BECAUSE NONE DARE APPROACH
IT HAS NEVER BEEN AND IT IS ALL THAT EVER WAS
AT THE CENTER YOU DO NOT FIND THE ANSWER
YOU DO NOT FIND YOURSELF THERE IS NO CENTER AND THERE IS NO YOU THERE IS ONLY MADNESS
WE ARE ALL HERE NOW.
WE ARE ALL HERE.
WE ARE.

   
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Re: Moon. - April 22nd 2017, 03:19 PM

So powerful, I love it. Especially this part and the end but it is all amazing. You have such a way with words and I always smile when I see a post by you.

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Re: Moon. - April 22nd 2017, 03:50 PM

Thank you both <3
   
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Re: Moon. - April 22nd 2017, 08:02 PM

Oh my gosh. This is amazing! I loved this part:
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Re: Moon. - April 23rd 2017, 04:02 AM

Thank you
   
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Re: Moon. - April 23rd 2017, 02:47 PM

I loved this. Thank you for sharing
   
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Re: Moon. - April 23rd 2017, 05:12 PM

Thank you
   
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Re: Moon. - April 23rd 2017, 09:49 PM

I like the questions asked at the beginning!


   
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Re: Moon. - April 24th 2017, 12:50 AM

This is so beautiful. I love all the references to the natural world, it gives the whole piece a kind of magical feel.


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Re: Moon. - April 24th 2017, 01:10 AM

Thank you lovely
   
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Re: Moon. - April 25th 2017, 06:32 PM

I love all of the parts that were picked out, but honestly, I loved the entire thing so I can't really pick my favourite part! Keep it up



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