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Nightmares - February 14th 2018, 06:51 PM

Hi, if this is horrible it's okay. I am going through a lot and wanted to try writing something.


Nightmares
You're in you're bed all tucked in and ready to fall asleep. Then you hear the noise outside of you're window.

You first hear screeching and you then hear tapping as he's trying to get in to get you.

You're sitting up on you're bed and you're so scared you don't want him to get you and all you see is a big man's Shadow outside you're window.

You're terrified and you want to scream but no noise will come out of you're mouth. You want to turn on the lights but you're too scared to even move. You close you're eyes and you beg for him not to be able to get in and grab you.

You keep looking around for something to help you be okay and you can't even sleep. You're heart is beating so fast you feel like it's going to jump out of your chest. But soon it will be over and no one got you and you feel relieved.
   
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Re: Nightmares - February 15th 2018, 03:35 AM

I like the description in this and can also feel the emotion of fear. I think you did well!


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Re: Nightmares - February 15th 2018, 04:40 AM

I could feel the emotions of fear you were trying to convey. I thought this was done quite well.

I hope that writing this helped in some way as well.



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Re: Nightmares - February 16th 2018, 02:57 AM

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