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Excuse me - October 3rd 2018, 03:06 PM

Excuse me,
How dare you treat me this way?
Who gives you the right to treat me like garbage?
I trusted you.
I opened my heart to you.
I poured my soul out to you.

"I'm scared."
"He's my 11:11."


Ha!
What are you scared of?
And may I ask,
Who exactly is your 11:11?

I feel it bubbling in my veins.
This unforgettable wrath.
I'm done being your placemat.
I'm tired of feeling used.
You can either grow up and treat me right,
Or say goodbye at the door.

Excuse me,
What is wrong with me?
Why did you choose him over me?

Know what?
Doesn't matter.
Because I deserve better.
I need to feel real love.
So you can leave your excuses in the trash,
And go run off with your new lover.

My kisses are special,
And my hugs are warm.
My heart is broken,
And my sleeves are torn.

Because of you.
You.

I will kiss your cold-stoned heart goodbye,
And be free to live my own life.

So I hope you enjoyed what we had,
Because frankly,
I did not.


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Re: Excuse me - October 3rd 2018, 09:44 PM

I can really feel the emotion in this!


   
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Re: Excuse me - October 3rd 2018, 09:50 PM

I can really relate to this!



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Re: Excuse me - October 3rd 2018, 11:08 PM

I liked this a lot. Thank you for sharing.


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Re: Excuse me - October 4th 2018, 12:37 PM

Love this bit:

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My kisses are special,
And my hugs are warm.
My heart is broken,
And my sleeves are torn.


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Re: Excuse me - October 6th 2018, 02:19 AM

This was great! Hugs.


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Re: Excuse me - October 23rd 2018, 11:26 AM

I loved it. Perfect
   
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Re: Excuse me - November 10th 2018, 06:31 AM

It was great, let's go hug
   
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Re: Excuse me - November 10th 2018, 04:36 PM

You definitely portrayed the strong, intense emotions in this one. The narrator is angry but they aren't going to be any more. Well done!
   
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