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lies laced in wine. - April 17th 2019, 11:08 PM

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your own voice is music to your ears
but nails across a chalkboard to mine
i need too many fingers to count the years
that you laced the lies in wine.
you drink alcohol--that's your vice
the smell on you fills my lungs like smoke
and of course you've never thought twice
about making me choke
but i do enough thinking for us both
i think about how screwed up you are
for perfering me unclothed.
the way push everyone down so far
everyone has to feel how you feel
and they have to like what you do
and even though ive tried to heal
the truth still worms its way through.
your voice is the reason why i shiver
because that means your presence is around
but i know you never fail to deliver
because you're so good at pushing me down
i hope to eventually beat you at your game
but for now i remain
i'd rather be dead than feel your flame
because at least i wouldn't be in pain
i know you like to cheat
so if i die before i before i can say checkmate
this round will be complete
since the dead can't take the bait

after all, it's your game, and your rules
no one else will ever stand a chance
because everyone except for you is a tool
just stepping stones for you to advance


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Re: lies laced in wine. - April 18th 2019, 04:35 PM

Those last four lines were powerful. Thank you for sharing <3


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Re: lies laced in wine. - April 20th 2019, 12:01 AM

I really like the last four lines, as well as this part:

Quote:
i need too many fingers to count the years
that you laced the lies in wine.
Overall, amazing job!


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Re: lies laced in wine. - April 20th 2019, 12:06 AM

This had so much emotion in it and it was really good. Sending you hugs.


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