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DeletedAccount71 October 16th 2020 10:34 PM
The Sink (*Strong* self-harm warning)
 
Drip, drop
Drip, drop
Softly it falls,
The quiet sound.
But there it is:
Proof of my suffering.
The sink, once white,
Is spattered with red.
The water turns it
A weak brown,
And the drain
Swallows my sin.
It looks as if
I killed someone.
In a way, I did.
I kill a piece of myself
Every time I do this.
I weep crimson tears
As I destroy my own body.
Please,
Tell me when my debt
Will be paid.
Tell me why,
After so many years,
I still must atone
In deep scarlet.

Dawn. October 18th 2020 06:52 AM
Re: The Sink (*Strong* self-harm warning)
 
This piece is very well written! :)

Arabesque- golfing girl. October 18th 2020 04:49 PM
Re: The Sink (*Strong* self-harm warning)
 
This was lovely:) I enjoyed reading this, I liked how you have the middle:) I hope you are doing okay. Sending you hugs.

DeletedAccount71 October 18th 2020 08:31 PM
Re: The Sink (*Strong* self-harm warning)
 
Thank y'all! It was the first thing I wrote in a while and I don't think it's half bad. I'm glad y'all like it!

Ennui. October 19th 2020 02:00 AM
Re: The Sink (*Strong* self-harm warning)
 
Quote:
t looks as if
I killed someone.
In a way, I did.
I kill a piece of myself
This is my favorite part.

You can do this. <3

Celyn October 20th 2020 06:49 PM
Re: The Sink (*Strong* self-harm warning)
 
This was well written! You're quite good at writing and you should definitely continue :)

DeletedAccount59 January 12th 2021 06:04 PM
Re: The Sink (*Strong* self-harm warning)
 
Well done, very descriptive! Feel free to share more of your work if you wish to do so. :)


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