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Post "The Feast" - February 13th 2021, 09:25 PM

I drown myself in fantasies these days.
I gorge myself on the hope that it will all go away in an instant.
I feast upon the desire to live a life that I can never have.
I chug the hope that one day I'll wake up and feel better all of a sudden down every day like a shot,
The feeling burning my throat.
I take pitiful bites of self love, care, and hygiene.
Repulsed by the taste.
And then I bury the flavour with harm, hatred and hopelessness.
What a shameful diet.

Though it's either this, or starve.


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Re: "The Feast" - February 13th 2021, 10:23 PM

I really like the way this reads. I could almost hear it being read in my mind with aggression and emotion and I really enjoyed reading it. I particularly like the last four lines, which I think are really familiar to me and probably many other people. Honestly really well written - thank you so much for sharing.


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Re: "The Feast" - February 13th 2021, 11:48 PM

Thank you. I'm so glad you like it.
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Re: "The Feast" - February 14th 2021, 07:26 AM

I really enjoyed this piece too.


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Re: "The Feast" - February 14th 2021, 11:16 AM

I can feel the frustration and anger in this, and it's extremely relatable.
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Re: "The Feast" - February 14th 2021, 06:42 PM

I feel I can relate to this a bit; thank you for sharing


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Re: "The Feast" - February 20th 2021, 05:48 AM

This was phenomenal. Thanks for sharing
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Re: "The Feast" - February 24th 2021, 08:54 PM

This is well written and the imagery is striking. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: "The Feast" - February 25th 2021, 06:10 PM

This was lovely. Thank you so much for sharing this with us


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Re: "The Feast" - March 4th 2021, 07:21 PM

I really like the style here!


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Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
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