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Post Heavy World - September 5th 2022, 08:13 PM

A poem about depression making me extremely fatigued, and the desire to sleep all of the time.

They say that burdened souls
have the weight of the world on their shoulders.
I am certainly feeling that weight
dragging me deeper and deeper through the earth's crust
into the bedrock of the world's inner core.
My ankles tied with ball and chain
And I sink
Sink
Sink
Deeper down, eyelids fluttering closed
Heartbeat slowing, body ever heavier.
A world too heavy, too much for these frail bones
A life too long, too strong for this glass heart
Warping in the heat, and shattering upon impact.
In my bed of rot and filth
Belongings strewn about and out of place
Out of place
Out of place just like me
I am pulling anvils
Pushing solid brick walls
Two immovable objects
The world is so heavy
And I am so tired
Always wanting to go back to bed
So I stay
My eyes are so heavy
And I sleep
And I sleep
And I sleep
And I sleep...


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Re: Heavy World - September 5th 2022, 08:34 PM

I can relate to this! I want to sleep all the time with my depression too and it feels heavy.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
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Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
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Re: Heavy World - September 5th 2022, 08:40 PM

You did a lovely job writing this and you think about so many things. Thank you for this.


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Re: Heavy World - September 6th 2022, 07:22 PM

I really love this and I can relate to a lot of the emotion in it. Thank you for sharing!


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Re: Heavy World - September 8th 2022, 10:41 AM

This is such a great piece.


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Re: Heavy World - September 8th 2022, 01:11 PM

One thing I learnt: that everything pulls you when it want. There's no escape.
Awesome poetry.
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Re: Heavy World - September 23rd 2022, 12:03 PM

I love the opening lines...very descriptive and relatable too. Thank you for sharing


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