Write your own poem.

[Broken-Wings]

Okaay, so, yeah. I'll start

Ooh Girl you make my heart beat so fast;
I know that this is going to last,
When were together it feels so right,
I just want to hold you every night,
Every touch,
It feels so great,
Nothing can stop us,
Nothing can shake,
These feelings I have,
I Know There True,
I'm Compleatly,
And Utterly,
In Love With You..

[WhySoSerious?]

Neat idea for a thread. You're poem was pretty good, did you just do that on the spot? I hope you don't mind a small bit of constructive criticism though. I just thought I would bring two errors which caught my eye, to your attention.

Firstly, you made a small grammatical error. "I know there true" you used "there" as in the location. (A good way to remember when to use each there is to think that "there" which is used for location, you can think of "here and there" because "there" has the word here in it )

Secondly, you just misspelled completely. Which is no biggy. I used to do this too, something that helped me was to think of the word "Complete" and add an ly to it and viola, you have "completely".

Anyways, criticism aside, good poem and brilliant thread idea I may post a poem later on when I can think of one.