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rip. i wish i loved you. - September 14th 2009, 10:59 PM

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a loved one dies && there's breaking hearts.
everyday we fall apart.
an angel's voice is out of breath,
the air is new, but not quite fresh.
i'm still in love, but far away.
heaven or hell, our love's the same.
will i see you?
will we be one?
so many questions left undone.
i have one thing, but scared to say.
will you love me until my day?
when God decides to save me.
and angel's decide to take me.
will you still love me?

and if i turn untrue,
and fall for someone new,
would you still hold my hand,
and tell me you understand?
i wanted to fall in love,
but i guess life's not long enough.
you were the only one,
but god finally won.
our dreams were in our hand,
music aside, and voices to stand.
and i'll miss you until that day,
but for now i have one thing to say.
i still love you.
but i bet heaven's nice.

to ricky ):
i love you babe.
rip february 14, 2007.


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Re: rip. i wish i loved you. - September 15th 2009, 12:02 AM

Wow Kayla
That was so touching, and so beautifully written
AMAZING job


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"Another year over, and we're still together.
It's not always easy, but McFly's here forever
I know you believe me, when you look into my eyes
'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!"
   
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Re: rip. i wish i loved you. - September 15th 2009, 03:51 AM

thank you Amelia.
it was hard for me to get it out.
i miss him. so much. /:
i wish he was still here with me, i know we could have made it.
he was the first boy to ever look at me with that sparkle in his eyes.
everybody used to say they wanted to be like us.
i wish we could have fallen in love. i really do.
):
gah. i'm a mess.


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Re: rip. i wish i loved you. - September 15th 2009, 04:02 AM

It was beautifully written with a lot of emotion.amazing writing really.


"You have to admit that love doesn't give you the license to own a person forever. Only a chance to enjoy someone's company for a moment."









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Re: rip. i wish i loved you. - September 15th 2009, 04:05 AM

thank you (:
/:
he's my inspiration for writing.
it was our dream to write, and sing together as careers in life.
i feel like i'm going on with our dream without him, and it makes me feel bad. ):
but i do it all for him.


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Re: rip. i wish i loved you. - September 15th 2009, 10:23 PM

you're an amazing writer.
i'm very sorry for your loss "/
   
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