Is this supposed to be a song? I think it would sound AWESOME as a punk-rock song. You should look in to writing up some music for it =D
"For the first time
in a long time,
I can say that I wanna try.
I feel helpless for the most part,
but I'm learning to open my eyes.
And the sad truth of the matter is,
I'll never get over it,
but I'm gonna try
to get better and overcome each moment
in my own way"
Motion City Soundtrack, "Even If It Kills Me"
The thread title reminded me of the song by Billy Idol, so I had to click!
I really love this! I can imagine the song perfectly, and it would be awesome to hear it heard! I can imagine turning on the radio one day and hearing this song, and then thinking "Hey! I saw this song posted on TH one day!"
This really is great. Keep writing, you've done a great job here! Post more, will you?