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Unhappy Fate (please please please read) - April 14th 2010, 01:03 AM

Once upon a time, there were two people. Ella and James. They were in love. Truly in love. One night, James called Ella. The moon that night was really big and very wellow. They talked about how, the night they met, the moon looked exacly the same. Big and yellow. Like no other. Then Ella proposed to make a wish upon the moon. James though it was silly but told Ella to make a wish anyway. And so she did. "What did you wish for, darling?" "I cant tell you, otherwise it wont come true" "Tell me" "alright. I wished, that many years from now, when we have children and they are grown up, you and I will wake up, holding hands, to see a moon exacly like this one. Because then, just like now, i will love you, more then life itself" A smile came upon james's face.

The next day, Friday, James and Ella were going to meat at the park for a date. Ella called James and told him that she would be late because she had classes at her university. James sat down on a park bench and waited for her. At one point, an old man came up to him and asked to sit down. James did not mind. The old man began to make small talk with him. The ma told James about how people cannot escape fate. And he told him that fate was about to take something he loved from him.
"Ella will die three days from now" "What? You know Ella?" "Not quite the way you would think. You see, three days from now, on monday, Ella will have four 2 hour periods at her university and she will miss the bus home. She will get into a car with four of her classmates at 6:10 and at 6:31 the car will clash with a bus and two people will die. Ella one of them. But there is a way to save her. You must give up your sight, voice and hearing" "But if i can no longer hear, see, or speak, what will happen to me then?" "you will live. And so will Ella. You will just live... I dont need an answer right now. I will be waiting for you tomorrow, same time, same place... If you do not come, I will take that as a no. Goodbye"

James never went back. He spent those three days avoiding Ella. She either dident try to talk to him. She dident call him, she dident text or come over. Every night, he cried into his pillow and hated himself. On monday, ella died, just as the old man said she would. And that same day he found a letter in his mailbox.

"Dear, beloved Jamed, I dont know when you are going to get this letter. But probably, i wont be alive anymore. And that is one of the hardes things for my mind to digest. The one thing that makes me happy, is you are alive. You probably dont understand anything, but it is so hard to write this. I'm crying, I love you. Why does this have to happen to us? I'm sorry for that day i was late to the park. He came up to me, oh James, he knew everything about us. Our song, our favorate movie... Some old man... He knew everything... And also, he said that you were going to die. You were suposed to die on Satturday. At 11 in the morning you were going to be hit by car. I couldnt, wouldnt believe it, but he knew everything. He said that there was a way to save you. To do that, I had to give my own life. Jamesm forgive me if you can... I agreed. He said I am going to die on monday. He dident say how, or when... I'm so scared.
It's evening, and i probably wont see you anymore... Just dont forget. Dont forget me. I will always love you. Till the very end, i will love you...
Love,
Ella"


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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 14th 2010, 01:10 AM

that was awsome very touching


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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 14th 2010, 01:41 AM

I agree. So touching.




   
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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 14th 2010, 04:36 AM

Amazing yet again. I would do it for my girl cuz a life with out her is no life at all. She is litterly my everything. Very touching and even breath taking. Beyond Amazing!



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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 14th 2010, 04:37 AM

Thank you, guys, it really means a lot <3


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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 14th 2010, 05:53 AM

And it is amazing to hear that someone would be willing to do that for their partner! Crimsonkin, good for you. you made my day))) PM me sometime


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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 14th 2010, 11:58 AM

Touching and amazing!


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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 15th 2010, 03:49 AM

Thanks a million, guys


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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 18th 2010, 04:53 AM

Okay. Wow. I dont cry. Well, not often anyway. it takes a lot to get me to cry. This was one of them. That was so sad, sweet and amazing. I mean...Wow......I am kinda curious though as to why they both had to die? I mean can someone PM me and explain that? If makes no sence. Why did he set them up like that? Any explanations will be helpful. Thanks.

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Re: Fate (please please please read) - April 25th 2010, 04:54 AM

Thank you so much <3


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