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Unhappy After the rain (the figurative language is confusing) - April 14th 2010, 06:22 AM

I'll return you the key
And the door will never open
Back to my own world
You know
That for
You and I
It's time to say goodbye
You know I came to say goodbye
This is just gray smke
We can hide in it
No longer
One pack
For the two of us
The sun
Wont release my soul
But still...
Goodbye
I will be in the clouds
And I know
What happens then
After the rain
I...
Blood red water
In the kitchen
And I cannot get enough
But the sun
Wont let go of my soul...


Stay forever lovely
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Re: After the rain (the figurative language is confusing) - April 14th 2010, 12:02 PM

Once again I love it. Keep it up.


And I will take you in my arms, and hold you right where you belong.
Til the day my life is through, this I promise you.121109
   
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