More Poems;<3 [advice plz]

[FatalDisaster]

--Just a Girl
I'm just a girl living in this thing called reality.
This girl dreams of a world of her own.
A world where no one judges you for who you are,
for who you love, or how you dress.
But she's just a girl, dreaming, she knows it will never happen.
People never stop hating, never stop abusing.
ALL THiS NEEDS TO BE STOPPED !!!
A world without all this hate and judgment would be a miracle.
But she's just a girl dreaming of a world of her own.
[9/6/2008] -FatalDisaster

--Live For Today
Live for today, because tomorrow may never come.
Love like you'll never see that person again.
Nobody ever sits down and says to themselves,
"Is this my last day?"
We Never wonder,
"I love them so much but will i wake up to see them by my side?"
Live for today and that very second that your in
because the past is gone, you can't change what happened,
and you might not see tomorrow.
Nothing else matters but right now.
Live for today, because tomorrow may never come.
[9/6/2008] -FatalDisaster

--Slowly Starving, Slowly Dying.
I'm slowly starving, slowly dying.
Mentally and Physically i'm dying.
I'm slowly starving from not having his touch on my fingers,
her voice in my ear, from not having his lips pressed softly on my cheek.
I'm slowly starving, slowly dying inside. Nothing can mend this broken heart.
There is someone out there searching, searching for me, as i am for them.
I wish i knew where they were or who they are.
The longer i lay here, the faster i'm going to rot,
or start to decay inside this thing they call "my body".
I'm slowly starving, slowly dying.
Replenish me before my face is found among the ashes,
and my arms behind the scars.
I don't have you anymore.
I'm dying, dying without you.
[11/29/2008] -FatalDisaster

[.Brittany.]

I like it so far.

[Stardaze]

I love it.

[MadPoet]

Gracey,

Just a few grammatical and spelling problems, but otherwise I really like this! It's really emotional, and even though this girl has a hard time getting through her life, she still finds hope in her dreams for herself. I think this describes a lot of teenagers out there.

Nicely written!