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Walking In The Sun...
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May 2nd 2010, 10:18 PM
When you look I fall
When you talk I stall Now I will not fight Or else I just might Fall in harder Fall in deeper I'm no martyr I just need her So take my blues as red My heart lives on undead Grey eyes haunt me in my dreams Grey eyes tear me from the seams So its no surprise, that grey eyes Have destroyed me once again There's really no way to go Our song's on the radio Feeling fingers and thumbs My heart beats to the drums I conceal What I feel Looks of steel Is this real So take my blues as red My heart lives on undead Grey eyes haunt me in my dreams Grey eyes tear me from the seams So its no surprise, that grey eyes Have destroyed me once again The dream starts like Just another one Feeling just right We're walking in the sun But then it gets crazy My vision gets hazy You slam shut the door And I wake up on the floor So take my blues as red My heart lives on undead Grey eyes haunt me in my dreams Grey eyes tear me from the seams So its no surprise, that grey eyes Have destroyed me once again ║▌│█│║▌║││█║▌│║▌║
ORIGINAL MCFLY FAN ®  "Another year over, and we're still together. It's not always easy, but McFly's here forever I know you believe me, when you look into my eyes 'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!" |
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 Quiet the chaos.
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May 3rd 2010, 07:49 AM
I really can't get enough of your writing. That was really great. As usual.
 It flowed well, rhymed well, and had meaning behind it. Great work. 
 it runs electric, it draws me home it knows the weakness deep in my soul. |
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Walking In The Sun...
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Name: Amelia
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May 3rd 2010, 10:20 AM
Thanks So Much Guys =]
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ORIGINAL MCFLY FAN ® "Another year over, and we're still together. It's not always easy, but McFly's here forever I know you believe me, when you look into my eyes 'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!" |
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AKA Reakless Emotion
Jeez, get a life!
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Re: Grey Eyes -
May 3rd 2010, 02:17 PM
You're writing is so amazing, I really enjoy reading it, when I see a thread started by you, I jump right to it because I know it's going to be good. Keep it up!
  And I will take you in my arms, and hold you right where you belong. Til the day my life is through, this I promise you.121109 |
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Walking In The Sun...
I've been here a while
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Name: Amelia
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Location: Waiting On A Second-Hand Pick Me Up
Posts: 1,338
Join Date: January 7th 2009
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May 3rd 2010, 03:37 PM
=] Haha
Thanks So Much Brittany. I Always Appreciate Your Lovely Comments
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ORIGINAL MCFLY FAN ® "Another year over, and we're still together. It's not always easy, but McFly's here forever I know you believe me, when you look into my eyes 'Cause McFly never dies, because The Heart Never Lies!" |
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