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Dear romanticized suicide - July 16th 2010, 04:05 PM

So I think it's good that there are so many creative people here letting out there emotions. I'd much rather see people write a million poems about suicide than ever try it

However, I have noticed (And I'm not talking about on this site, but generally, in life) there seems to be a lot of poems glorifying suicide, something horrible which I don't think should be held in such high esteem. For the record, I have been there, and if writing a poem about it helps you deal then go for it, baby!


Still, I wrote a little poem about my feelings on the matter.



Dear romanticized suicide;

Red rivers running deep.

Shiny guns and bridges tall,

A bunch of pills to help me sleep.

Poetic in your planning,

disatrious in your wake.

Greiving tears of kinship near

You put it down to fate.
   
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Re: Dear romanticized suicide - July 16th 2010, 04:51 PM

I have to say, you're talented!
I love it.


"'Colie, you should never be surprised when people treat you with respect. You should expect it.'
I shook my head. 'You don't know--' I began. But, as usual, she didn't let me finish.
'Yes,' she said simply, 'I do know. I've watched you, Colie. You walk around like a dog waiting to be kicked. And when someone does, you pout and cry like you didn't deserve it.'
'No one deserves to be kicked,' I said.
'I disagree,' she said flatly. 'You do if you don't think you're worth any better...'"
   
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Re: Dear romanticized suicide - July 16th 2010, 05:37 PM

I think this is awesome.


   
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Re: Dear romanticized suicide - July 16th 2010, 05:45 PM

very nice! i like it.


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Re: Dear romanticized suicide - July 18th 2010, 03:54 AM

Thanks guys
   
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Re: Dear romanticized suicide - July 18th 2010, 08:40 AM

You are so talented!
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Re: Dear romanticized suicide - July 20th 2010, 06:43 AM

That was great. Creative idea, well written. I loved it.


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Re: Dear romanticized suicide - July 20th 2010, 06:27 PM

this is really good your so talented
   
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