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Feedback Wanted!!! - July 22nd 2010, 03:19 PM

So I've written a couple of things, and I've targeted myself to write at least one more novel and 5 short stories before I go back to college in September. What I really need now, having done a couple of first drafts, is some honest constructive feedback to help me with redrafting so I can make this as good as it can be and hopefully submit it to a publisher. If anybody would be interested at all in just reading some of my stuff, PM me with your email address and I can email you the manuscripts. Cheers!


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Re: Feedback Wanted!!! - July 22nd 2010, 04:55 PM

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