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A poem from English class.. - December 12th 2010, 12:53 AM

December 8, 2010

Darkness engulfs her
As she contemplates, teetering on the edge
Of the abyss. Surrender, and she might
Finally be free.
But stay here and fight, eventually losing the battle
Against the overwhelming emptiness that clouds her soul
And the vicious cycle will start all over again.
But it is here, wobbling on the last crumbling pieces of
Solid ground beneath her feet that she finally looks up
And sees for once that she is not alone in this cold, forgotten place.
Curious eyes search her face, wondering
Who is she to them? And who are they to her?
A mother, a brother, a teacher, a friend?
But then the darkness swells again, and they slowly disappear.
Alone again, a great shiver runs through her body
As she closes her eyes, crosses her fingers,
And jumps.

We're starting the poetry unit in my English class and this was an assignment I was supposed to hand in but didn't yet...


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Re: A poem from English class.. - December 12th 2010, 04:03 AM

Oh you should totally hand this in. I love it!

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Re: A poem from English class.. - December 12th 2010, 04:08 AM

You should have handed this in because it was fantastic. Thank you for sharing. I hope you post some more stuff in the future.


   
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Re: A poem from English class.. - December 12th 2010, 03:54 PM

This is great, I love it!!
   
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Re: A poem from English class.. - December 12th 2010, 04:02 PM

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Re: A poem from English class.. - December 13th 2010, 09:49 PM

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Re: A poem from English class.. - December 14th 2010, 10:46 AM

Thanks guys. I think I'll pass it in next chance I get.


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Re: A poem from English class.. - December 14th 2010, 01:58 PM

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