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Post Fair Lady (A Poem) - January 12th 2011, 11:09 PM

This is a poem I have worked on but now I am posting it, it is about a girl who is the one. Simple. Here it is :

Fair lady, my fair lady,
where are you ??
My heart is sad,
my mind is shattered,
my soul broken,
because you are away from me.

I weep for you every night,
longing, thinking,
dreaming, fantasizing of you.
I wonder about your demeanor,
about your seemliness,
about your mind,
about your soul,
about the sweetness of your voice.
To hear it would be a blessing.

I dream of lands far from my reach,
some deep in my mind, others deep in space,
I long to transcend this reality,
to pass onto the next to new lands.
But in all my dreams and fantasies,
it is the dream of you
that I enjoy the most.

your existance is critical to me,
to feel the touch of your hand,
the brush of your hair,
the warmth of your smile,
the grace of your eyes,
the comfort of your love,
the beauty of your form,
to be next to you,
this is what I desire the most.

I yearn to behold you my fair lady,
when will I see you,
so that I can finally be with you,
my fair lady.


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Re: Fair Lady (A Poem) - January 13th 2011, 12:17 AM

This is really pretty, and equally expressive. I like it a lot.


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Black, white, gay, straight, bisexual. Whether you are smart or quiet or impossibly in love with your best friend, someone out there cherishes your smile and gets butterflies when you walk into a room.

Someone out there can't stop thinking about you. You Are Beautiful. Don't ever believe differently."

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Re: Fair Lady (A Poem) - January 13th 2011, 01:36 AM

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This is really pretty, and equally expressive. I like it a lot.
Thank you very very much. It actually started out as a poem about a car, a Nissan car called the Fairlady z.


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Re: Fair Lady (A Poem) - January 13th 2011, 02:37 AM

This is really great!
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