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For Somebody's Sake? - March 23rd 2011, 10:50 PM

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First piece in a long time. Sorry it's bad.

The roadside flower
Is it blooming for somebodyís sake?
It isnít noticed by the people passing byÖ
Burnt under the sun
Exposed to the rain
Somedayís dream is being blown by the wind

Always in isolation
Without words for
Freedomís compensation
The indifferent walls
It canít even endure
But somehow it is blown by the wind.

A nameless star
Is it shining for somebodyís sake?
Forgotten in a corner of the night sky
Remembering
The astonishing darkness,
That light for sure is the ticket to the future

Giving up
Turning my back
As I struggle,
Always recklessly
Iím stretching that hand

Regardless.
His actions.
For somebody's sake.
Does my mind not matter?
Just my hope is at stake.

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Thankyou.


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Re: For Somebody's Sake? - March 23rd 2011, 11:09 PM

I don't its bad, it's very beautifully written.


"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."

"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free."

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Re: For Somebody's Sake? - March 23rd 2011, 11:09 PM

I love your poem especially the beginning!
   
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Re: For Somebody's Sake? - March 27th 2011, 12:26 PM

Thank you


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Re: For Somebody's Sake? - March 27th 2011, 03:18 PM

Everything just is; there need not be any reason. The way we are is the result of the way everything else is. The way we are allows everything else to be the way they are.

There is so much to be learned from beings of nature, as they are skilled in the art of sincerity, openness, and maintaining a true presence. Cosmic insignificance is common to all beings - but simply by being present, exactly as we are, we can touch the seeds of healing and inspiration in other individuals without our knowledge. The same goes for ourselves; we have all the potential to heal right within us - the challenging part is to get back in touch with it.

Thank you for sharing.


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Re: For Somebody's Sake? - March 28th 2011, 08:58 PM

Hey Kokoro.. This isn't bad at all. Infact it's quite the opposite. I really likeit
   
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Re: For Somebody's Sake? - March 28th 2011, 09:10 PM

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A nameless star
Is it shining for somebody’s sake?
Forgotten in a corner of the night sky
Remembering
The astonishing darkness,
That light for sure is the ticket to the future
I really like this part.

I don't think this is bad at all. It's very good. I am sorry that you are struggling.<3


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