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Trojan Horse - May 19th 2011, 01:56 AM

Walking down the street,
Iím no one special to meet.
My life story is full with sadness,
Torn, disaster, hurt and madness.
Iím building a wall of confusion and lies,
So no one can hear my silent cries.
Iíve become quite the creature of masquerade,
Hiding my heart that has decayed.

I tried to put down the mask that hides my fear,
I was afraid to let you near.
But I let you bring your Trojan horse into my wall,
Diseased from within and now it falls.
I try to rebuild the wall and sturdy the defenses,
I canít feel anything, appeal to the senses.
If Iím unwanted then thereís no need,
To play with my mind and keep me deceived.

I will go back to where I was,
An empty soul just because,
At least it was not a lie,
And so I shall not cry.


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Re: Trojan Horse - May 20th 2011, 01:48 AM

Wow!!! This is amazing! great, great job on this.




   
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Re: Trojan Horse - May 20th 2011, 02:41 AM

Thanks.


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"Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"
"Weak heart, Dying soul, Falling apart, Make me whole, These broken blues, Peirce your being, Hide the truth, You won't be seeing."
"Deeper, Deeper, Deeper inside me I live a life that seems to be a lost reality."
"Big Brother is watching."

   
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Re: Trojan Horse - May 20th 2011, 03:08 AM

I agree this really is beautiful writing! Sad and full of emotion but all the more beautiful because of it.
Great job!


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Re: Trojan Horse - May 20th 2011, 03:48 AM

Thank you very much!


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"Deeper, Deeper, Deeper inside me I live a life that seems to be a lost reality."
"Big Brother is watching."

   
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Re: Trojan Horse - May 20th 2011, 12:01 PM

This is actually really good. The part about the mask really describes me. I love the imagery you provided, and the ordering of the words. simply amazing. Great job<3


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Re: Trojan Horse - May 20th 2011, 03:36 PM

Thank you! The funny thing is, I can only do this when I'm really upset about something and what was bothering me is obvious in the poem. I wish I could write like this all the time though.


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"Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"
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"Deeper, Deeper, Deeper inside me I live a life that seems to be a lost reality."
"Big Brother is watching."

   
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Re: Trojan Horse - May 20th 2011, 03:42 PM

Absolutely beautiful...great job on this!!



   
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Re: Trojan Horse - May 22nd 2011, 06:45 PM

All I have to say is, <3.... This is great.


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Re: Trojan Horse - May 22nd 2011, 06:51 PM

Thanks guys!


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"Deeper, Deeper, Deeper inside me I live a life that seems to be a lost reality."
"Big Brother is watching."

   
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Re: Trojan Horse - May 22nd 2011, 06:52 PM

So much talent! You're great!
   
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Re: Trojan Horse - May 23rd 2011, 06:30 PM

Aw thanks!!!! I was just writing what I was feeling.


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"You have not failed if you learned something from it."
"Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"
"Weak heart, Dying soul, Falling apart, Make me whole, These broken blues, Peirce your being, Hide the truth, You won't be seeing."
"Deeper, Deeper, Deeper inside me I live a life that seems to be a lost reality."
"Big Brother is watching."

   
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