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a girl - May 25th 2011, 10:40 PM

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a showdow in the dark
a child with long black silky hair
her hair down her back
bright green eyes looking at you
she is small about 15
wearing a brown with a white button up top
she cries for but she alone
she curls in a ball and sits all by herself
the darkness and all you see is
a dark figure beneath your feet
as the night she falls asleep
but in the morning she is gone


live life like it is take it as you go

i may be a adnormal girl liveing an adnormal life but thats what makes me unique

im just a girl who dosent know where she is going

you ask whose my hero you as long as you dont give up on me im fine

its ok to cry get it all out

hun, I LOVE YOU TO DEATH SO DONT GO

im STONGER than you think im WEAKER than i seem so dont underestimate me

never give up on something you cant go a day without thinking about, do you think about life everyday
   
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Re: a girl - May 25th 2011, 11:35 PM

Oh wow, this is very powerful! Excellent job.
I love the great use of energy in this. You've really portrayed the emotion quite well.
I'm impressed. <3


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Re: a girl - May 25th 2011, 11:53 PM

i love it very well done keep it up you got talent


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Re: a girl - May 26th 2011, 01:58 AM

I really like this
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Re: a girl - May 27th 2011, 09:52 PM

hey KJ this is really good x
   
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Re: a girl - May 29th 2011, 03:54 AM

this is good, keep sharing with us(:


I'm burning out like a bright light, I wasn't ready for this. You're adorable as hell, but I'm glancing at your wrist.
   
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