My dream( nightmare) last night

[gloves123]

hey guys! this was a dream i had last night and since i cant forget it i though i might as well write a poem / story out of it! tell me what you all think!





raven with black eyes,
looking down into the darkness
where she lies
alone in her own sadness

feeling to weak to move
but to tired to fall asleep
she just lies there
mumbling to herself

" what happend?
where am i?
help me
im scared"

tears run down her face
and she burys it in her hands
the rain starts to fall
and all she can do is cry

her crys and moans echo
through the black abyss
she sits up and draws up her knees
and sits in a little ball

" why is this happening?
where is everyone?
did they just forget me?
and leave me here alone?"

the raven caws
and flys down into the darkness
it lands beside her
and somthing starts to happen

it gleams and sparkles
and lights up the dark
she looks up from her tears
and her eyes squint from the light

the raven grows taller
and turns into a boy
the familiar face
takes her off guard

he holds out a hand
and she takes hold
he pulls her up
and the rain stops

" I thought everyone forgot me
and left me here alone
to die"
the boy just smiled

" they didnt leave you
they dont even know your here
come on
lets head back"

he lead her off
and they walked for a short time
until she just had to say somthing
she opened her mouth

" im really glad you came
i knew i could count on you"
the boy stopped in his tracks
" whats wrong?"

he turned around
his eyes black
" You can count on me,
but no one can count on you."

" You lied about where you were
and what you are
but we both know what you are
your a weirdo, a waste of space,
an idiot.......a FREAK!"

he shouted at her
her face dropped
and her eyes filled
and spilled over

he let go of her hand
and pushed her down
laughing a dark laugh
and started walking into the darkness

she got up and tryed to go after him
she grabbed his arm
" wait!" she cried
he just turned back

he whipped his arm free
" Get away from me LIAR!"
and turned back into the raven
as she watched him fly away

she dropped to her knees
and tears ran down her face again
she was alone in the dark
" Why?'' she whispered.

[Misslostintears]

Wow. thats a weird dream. ive had something like that before.

[GoneBeyondRepair]

aww im sorry it turned out bad after it was starting to go good but it did make a good poem O:

[**Ordinary Day**]

This is really epic. I like it but it is definitely dark.

[Michaela *heartbroken*]

I really like this keep up the good work xx