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Falling In Love. <3 - September 25th 2011, 09:21 PM

Wellllll, this is a new song that I wrote.
I haven't been able to write a song in quite a long time so it's probably not one of my best works.
I hope you enjoy it though!
Any comments / advice is always welcome and appreciated. (:


If you'll be the clouds, then I'll be the rain.
I fell for you the first time you said my name.
So unexpected, but so beautiful,
as I fall further my heart screams for more.
If you'll be the wind, then I'll be the leaves.
You cast your force against me, we're slowdancing.
High off the ground, and up in the sky.
You first gave me wings when I looked in your eyes.


And I'm falling in love with you over again tonight.
And I surrender all to your love,
you brought me into the light.
We're shining like stars so bright.
You're helping me open my eyes.

If you'll be the keys, then I'll be the chord.
Song of my heart won't you play once more?
Music so soft, a melody so sweet.
Whenever I'm with you I start to believe.
Not only the day but I feel at night,
I'm with you everytime that I close my eyes.

And I'm falling in love with you over again tonight.
And I surrender all to your love,
you brought me into the light.
We're shining like stars so bright.
You're helping me open my eyes.

So let's put our love on display,
to show you color all my grays.
And please say you'll always be mine,
it's your love that makes me shine.

And I'm falling in love with you over again tonight.
And I surrender all to your love.
you brought me into the light.
We're shining like stars so bright.
You helped me open my eyes.
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Re: Falling In Love. <3 - September 25th 2011, 09:28 PM

The lyrical content is lovely Kayla!
Keep writing. I like it!
   
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Re: Falling In Love. <3 - September 26th 2011, 05:23 PM

I enjoy this on an epic level of awesomeness


My dad said girl's love guy's with scars...wheres the girl thats loving me?
Fighting is useless because they said I am just doomed to fail
"I ripped the wings off of an angel
and sowed them on my back
I watched them turn a darkening
bleeding the colour black
I soar above the clouds on these dark angel wings
keeping an eye on tortured souls
that live this life of pain"
   
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Re: Falling In Love. <3 - September 27th 2011, 10:10 PM

Aw, well thank you Joshie and Lex. (:
I appreciate it a lot!


When you can't find your way home,
and when life gets too hard to face on your own.
I will stand as a light through the darkness unknown,
I will walk with you, so you're never alone.
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Re: Falling In Love. <3 - September 27th 2011, 10:58 PM

I love this song so much! I wish it would be played on the radio!


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Re: Falling In Love. <3 - September 28th 2011, 10:30 PM

Aww, well thank you so much! <3
Tha'ts so sweeet.


When you can't find your way home,
and when life gets too hard to face on your own.
I will stand as a light through the darkness unknown,
I will walk with you, so you're never alone.
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