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if i "fell" for the last time - March 22nd 2009, 12:36 AM

if i "fell":
would anyone be there to save me
would i want anyone to be there to save me
would i care if no one was there
would people care if i "fell"
if i "fell" for the last time
the answers:
pobably not
maybe i would
yes i would
probably not
if i "fell" for the last time
the real anwers:
no,no one would be there to save me
yes,i would want someone,anyone,to be there to save me
yes,i would be hurt if no came
yes,peope would care if i "fell"


it sucks i know it does,but what do you think when you read it???


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Re: if i "fell" for the last time - March 22nd 2009, 01:15 AM

IT dosen't suck
it was good actully
well done
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"For God gave us a spirit not of fear but of power and love and self-control." 2 Timothy 1:7

"Do not be conformed to this world, but be transformed by the renewal of your mind, that by testing you may discern what is the will of God, what is good and acceptable and perfect." Romans 12:2

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Re: if i "fell" for the last time - March 22nd 2009, 02:55 AM

really?
cuz i like ust came up with it outta lik no where lol


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Re: if i "fell" for the last time - March 22nd 2009, 12:33 PM

It doesn't suck at all! You shouldn't be so hard on yourself, i actually quite like it. Keep writing, it's a great way to express yourself. Post more, ok?


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Re: if i "fell" for the last time - April 5th 2009, 01:55 PM

i have like 2 or 3 new poems that i wrote a few days ago,did u maybe want me to post em? i actually think theyre kinda good


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Re: if i "fell" for the last time - April 5th 2009, 02:21 PM

Yes, post them! If they're anything like this one I can't wait to read them. You're a good poet


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- I'm not strong enough to stay away -
- and I wanna leave -
- and I wanna stay -
- And I'm so confused -
- So hard to choose between the pleasure and the pain -
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Re: if i "fell" for the last time - April 5th 2009, 02:23 PM

thanks!!!
ok,theyll be up by the end up of the day


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