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In a Dream - November 6th 2011, 06:15 AM

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I feel like I am in a dream
Nothing is what it seems
Yesterday happened so fast
I didnt even have time to react
To stop it before I started
And now I feel retarded
While I look at my arms
I fall back into this dream
Where I feel disappointed and it doesnt even seem real
And I want to do it again
Just to get me through the day
And keep me from what I want to say
This time I could be less obvious
And if I am cautious it could work
Just one more time couldnt hurt
Maybe it will wake me from this dream
And let me actually breath
   
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Re: In a Dream - November 6th 2011, 07:48 AM

I really like this. I can feel what you were going through. Nice job on conveying your emotions. Keep writing!


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Re: In a Dream - November 6th 2011, 06:54 PM

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I really like this. I can feel what you were going through. Nice job on conveying your emotions. Keep writing!
Thank you so much for the feedback!
   
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Re: In a Dream - November 8th 2011, 12:36 AM

This poem is so good! I really like it and can totally relate! nicely said and put into words! You have a very good talent keep up the work
   
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Re: In a Dream - November 8th 2011, 12:38 AM

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This poem is so good! I really like it and can totally relate! nicely said and put into words! You have a very good talent keep up the work
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