fanfic (sorta)

[gloves123]

ok so im writing a fanfiction about my favorite manga/anime tokyo mew mew. this is what i have so far but im stuck so some ideas would be apreciated please no cabbage headed ideas.

Ichigo walked into her room, still freezing from the snow. She took the ribbons out of her hair and fell back onto her bed. School had been just as bad as ever, Masaya was dead, but school only reminded her of it more. It had been after the final battle, Ichigo leaned over his dead body, crying. She tried to save him by giving him all she was, but all that did was make her hurt more. Ichigo closed her eyes as tears fell onto her pillow. She curled up into a ball and cried just like the last night and the last. Masaya was gone, the mews still worked at café mew mew but hadn’t fought in 3 years , and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she missed the aliens. Pie, Taruto…even Kisshu. Ichigo looked up as she heard a noise.
A tap.
The noise sounded again. Ichigo lifted herself from her tear soaked pillow and walked slowly to the door. But when she opened it there was nothing there. She heard the tap and looked over slowly to the window. She started walking, taking cautious steps. She reached for the curtain and hesitated for a moment. With a thrust, she grabbed the curtain and yanked it open. Ichigo’s eyes opened wide as the golden eyes on the other side stared back at her. She stared at the grinning face and forest green hair, the person floating outside her window. She slowly raised one hand to her mouth as she spoke.
“Kisshu….”

Chapter 1

“Hey Koneke Chan, miss me?” He said, still grinning. (I don’t know HOW he could be heard through a window!) Ichigo stood there, eyes wide. She didn’t know if she was dreaming or not. Kisshu smiled more sarcastically.
“Can you let me in? It’s freezing out here.” Ichigo stood there for another moment. She unlatched the window and lifted it up, which wasn’t easy considering that ice had grown over the edges. Cold air blasted into her room as Kisshu floated in. He turned and closed the window. Ichigo quickly wiped her tears away before he could see them. Kisshu turned around to face her before she could wipe away all her tears. His smile vanished off his face and into a pained look.
“Ichigo…. were you crying?” He asked. She wiped another tear away before she could respond in words, she just shook her head. He patted her head and smile.
“You can’t lie very well, you know?” He laughed.” Why were you crying?” Ichigo looked away from him.
“Why did you come back?” She asked, desperate to change the subject. Kisshu laughed again.
“I’m not allowed to come back and visit?” Ichigo looked at him out of the corners of her eyes.
“You haven’t come in 3 years.” She said. Kisshu Laughed awkwardly.
“Ok, maybe there WAS another reason.”
“What?” Kisshu looked serious now.