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Name: Marie Smith
Age: 16
Gender: physically female mentally male
Location: Indiana
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Join Date: November 25th 2011
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You make me fall in love -
December 14th 2011, 03:47 AM
Just a song I wrote, tell me what you think. :]
(verse1) You make me fall in love with your pretty face you make everybody feel like they're a disgrace you make me fall in love every time i see your smile (chorus) I love you more than a butterfly i love you more than apple pie there's a way i think and a way i do i just wish i could do it with you (verse2) your wonderful to me your perfect as could be personality your so lovely you dont know who you are but i know so far that i need to tell you now (chorus) (bridge) i'll always love your name never want you to change i'll always think of you first you make my heart want to burst i need to tell you now (chorus) x2 ~loveless but looking, mindless but thinking, open but quiet, and that's just me~
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Happy Feet :hehe:
 I've been here a while ******** 
Name: Suvieeeeeeee
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Location: Very far away from here, beyond right and wrong, there is a place, you'll find me there........
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Re: You make me fall in love -
December 14th 2011, 11:02 AM
It is really nice! But I think you should add some more lines describing the person. The description feels a bit less.
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