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December 25th 2011, 01:34 AM
This thread has been labeled as triggering, particularly on the subject of suicide, by the original poster or by a Moderator. The contents of this thread therefore might not be suitable for certain sensitive users. Please take this into consideration before continuing to read.
Just let me die how I wanna
Let me leave how I arrived Let me close my eyes to the dark And wake up to the light Let me show you how it really feels To be someone like me In this society today, I could never really be free I got a six foot USB cord And I know what to do with it I got a bottle of pills on the counter And I know I can take them Let me leave how I arrived I promise I'll do it quietly I promise I won't struggle If you'd just pull the rope a little tighter I'd be ever so grateful This is truly my last goodbye I don't want to see you cry Wrap your arms around me one last time If you really must... I'm not doing this to hurt you... I swear upon my life, and though I'm taking it tonight, I promise that I love you.. Let me leave how I arrived. Alive.  #OCKest2006 pride<3 #A7XFamForever  R.I.P. James Owen Sullivan, the Reverend Tholomew Plague We love and miss you, foREVer.<3 |
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C'est la vie. ♥
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December 30th 2011, 04:32 PM
Sorry it took me so long to get back to you on this. But, I absolutely loved it. It kinda gave me chills. I've definitely been in that place before and this piece definitely brought up thoughts of that, which is a good thing. It was very raw and I could tell you weren't trying to be fancy -- you were just writing what you feel. That's awesome! Keep writing and keep letting me know when you have new work up! You're great!
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December 30th 2011, 06:54 PM
This is poem is very relateable. I definately know what that feels like.
"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land among the stars."
"For those who don't care, for those who can't see, never give up, always thrive to be free." Smile, you are beautiful www.operationbeautiful.com Blessed Be! Nicole AKA Nikki Artist, Poet, and Future Social Worker  |
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December 31st 2011, 02:11 PM
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The emotion here, as Sammi said, was very raw. Your writing style is one that makes the reader feel, which is the goal of any good piece of writing. Keep expressing! Writing is a great way to get these feelings off your chest. |
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