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The Sun Will Rise. -
December 29th 2011, 10:53 AM
This poem is for anyone and everyone. Everyone in life inevitably has a low moment at some point, and if you're currently going through something then I hope you can find hope from these words, and more importantly, realize that one day the sun will rise. If you're reading this, whether I know you personally or not - I love you, and you are loved.
------- Prelude People avoid the topic of mental illness, and that irks me The current state of affairs as of late isn't how things should be Why stigmatize a condition that is so widespread? The thought of how many suffer needlessly brings dread Well I'm tired of the situation at hand So I'm here to write, to try and take a stand Many are too afraid to speak, their minds acting as a vice But for too long I've been restrained, so I'm here to break the ice I can't just sit by and let a friend needlessly die So here's a short story to give hope for you to try If you're currently in a dark place I hope that you find peace, love, and grace ------- I once thought in my life that I was better off dead Until one day I got sick of bleeding in the red I spent forever looking for a place without worry Sick of the falling tears, my eyes were left far too blurry I've been looking for that one love to know Yet when I'm so close, I just let them go I cared too much, and it seems that you cared enough to leave Though I've never been one to wear emotions on my sleeve All of these events surrounding me had taken its toll But the truth is that everyone is just a roaming soul All of these tests could either break my heart or save me But at the road's end, I saw who I was meant to be I can see the weight in your eyes Behind the mask of your disguise There's a thorn in your side, you're clearly stressed Through the night, I'm here to provide you rest In time, everything will be alright And that day will come, rays shining bright I know that right now you may be unable to see it But you're far too strong to just give up on life now and quit You're not the only person who's fighting an uphill climb But believe me when I tell you that you can win with time And now, I'm not afraid anymore Let someone help you, you'll win this war This whole time, you've slowly been breaking your own heart While sitting through the cold rainfalls, hoping they part You don't have to try and walk alone through the dark When all is said and done, I hope I've left a mark No, this isn't just a cold spell that you're going through If for nothing else, I'm here to say that I love you It's not too late for you, I'm still here I hope these words will reach ears that hear Who we are is who we are In the past my soul was marred I've left hearts in broken pieces, and I wish I could take words back But even with the ugly scars, I'm not defined by what I lack I made my compromises, but I won't make any with you A lot of time passed for me to get here - if only you knew Despite your situation, you'll make it through all of this And once you do, what's waiting on the other side is bliss Now the last chapter of this note lies ahead, so take heed Long ago I was once like you, but now I have been freed Through this journey, my clouds have slowly disappeared And now, after all of the trials, I've made it here And after everything, it's so that you can hear me say That even if you feel that you've somehow lost your own way I say this to you, so look in my eyes All the storms will part, and the sun will rise ------- Deviantart link to my poem: http://magicxb.deviantart.com/#/d4kkuf1 Let me know what you think. I had to spend my sleepless night (thanks to sinus congestion) doing something productive, lol.
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Re: The Sun Will Rise. -
December 29th 2011, 05:04 PM
That is a great poem. It really spoke the truth. Great job and I think it was worth it that you didn't sleep if you wrote a poem that good. You should write more poems, you seem to be very good at it.
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Re: The Sun Will Rise. -
January 4th 2012, 10:05 PM
Thanks guys!
I've written a lot of other poems before this one, but this is the first one that I've written in a couple of months.
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Re: The Sun Will Rise. -
January 4th 2012, 11:55 PM
Thank you so much for posting this. I really like it. I was justing thinking about how horrible today had been and this made me feel better. I love it!
And somehow now you're everybody's fool. ~Evanescence
You don't know what it's like to be like me. Welcome to my life. ~Simple Plan I'm not perfect, but I keep trying. ~Hedley Maybe we'll turn it around, 'cause it's not too late; it's never too late. ~Three Days Grace Nothing's ever easy, and if it is, you're not trying hard enough. The best way to get revenge on someone who has hurt you through the years is to smile at them as though you have never cried any tears. |
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Re: The Sun Will Rise. -
January 15th 2012, 05:11 PM
WOW! I really liked this. It was amazing thanks for posting this. I will keep this in mind. Its a great help.
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Re: The Sun Will Rise. -
January 17th 2012, 12:22 AM
I really loved this as well. Thank you so much for posting this, it is really something true that I will have to keep thinking about.
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January 21st 2012, 05:19 PM
Outstanding. I know people will be helped by this. It's great.
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