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"Thank You" - January 4th 2012, 07:19 PM

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Darling Iím your angel
Youíre my butterfly
We both have wings
But I donít know how to fly

I know itís scary on the inside
When your best friend wants to die
I know you just want her alive
Youíd do anything to just watch her shine

You canít give her
Every answer that she needs
But youíre a brave soldier
And youíll fight for her dreams

You wish you could do more
Than just comfort her with words
But now itís time
To truly explore her hurt

Friends in a fight
You wish it would end
So you can see
Her smile again

One thing you fear
That keeps you up all night
Is that her momís wine
Will be out of sight

The knives come out
Her blood bleeds through
Your best friend committed suicide
And thereís nothing you can do

You tried your best to be her sun
To let the light shine through
But it hurts even more
When youíre the only one

Justin, I was your angel
That would stand there and cry
When I saw it all played out
And as I stood there with my hands tied

I said, ďI canít take it anymore.
Itís time for me to dieÖ..Ē
As your angel, I watch over you
Please donít do the things
That made me forget the truth


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Re: "Thank You" - January 5th 2012, 01:20 AM

This was really good. I could feel the emotions in it. Actually, I got teary eyed.


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Re: "Thank You" - January 5th 2012, 08:15 PM

awwwwwwww
Rach, as i was reading it, i was thinking aout the angel thing with justin, and it made me think you were writing this from his perspective, and then its yeah and oh my gosh i love it rachel! i love you too


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Re: "Thank You" - January 7th 2012, 01:58 AM

Thank you so much! That means a lot.

Yeah I did write it in Justin's perspective. That's where I got the angel thing from. And the butterfly from the book "luna." I didn't tell him about it. Thanks, love ya cuz!


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Re: "Thank You" - January 11th 2012, 11:29 PM

really great poem. i liked it a lot.
   
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Re: "Thank You" - January 15th 2012, 08:51 PM

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Thank you so much! That means a lot.

Yeah I did write it in Justin's perspective. That's where I got the angel thing from. And the butterfly from the book "luna." I didn't tell him about it. Thanks, love ya cuz!
your welcome and yeah, i kinda figured with the angel thing, but i was thinking like, the butterfly from like, the butterfly thing. i love you too cousin<33


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Re: "Thank You" - January 16th 2012, 10:51 PM

oh the butterfly came from the book Luna. Luna was considered a butterfly. So the transgender thing, I call Justin a butterfly now.


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