New Song about a Girl I Like. Adorableness = Yes. :3

[Zentman J]

New song I wrote. I might record it soon, don't really know. Made for the Acoustic Guitar w/ a gentle finger picking pattern, except for the end.

Verse 1:
The bitter winds of winter had come
And with it came the snow
The flakes dancing to an unknown song
And putting on a festive show

I set out at once to find her
To see if we could have a go
I sought her out and we went for a ride
No one else, and to say hello

The day went by and I wasn’t the same
She did this to every guy
A gentle friendship that lasted an age
And the spark would never die

Chorus:
She’s the extraordinary girl
There’s nothing of her kind
And she’s the sparkle in my eyes
She’s the sun’s setting purple haze
The warmth of a summer’s day
Her only limit is the skies

Verse 2:
Then spring came and the flowers bloomed
The sun warmed up the earth
We would walk all day barefoot in the grass
Every step an unlimited worth

Just me and her was all that that mattered
In the sun and blowing breeze
I need her and she needed me
That’s all the matters in days like these

And even though she was no lover of mine
I felt the need to kiss her cheek
She had given me hope, she had given me pride
She had saved me from the bleak

Chorus

Bridge:
Now I could see that there’s nothing I could do
If I wanted her gone, which I didn’t want
It’d be the death of me to even try
She’s addicting and I will not withdraw
She’s made me the person I am today
And I will never say goodbye

Verse 3:
Cicadas start crying
And the evening air grows thick
Laying there in a triangle form
A soothing song seemed to do the trick

We never thought the moment would come
When we would have to say goodbye
It seemed like the day was a year of our time
But deep inside we knew we had to try

So we went our own ways
Saying “We’d do it again someday”
So I’m waiting for the millionth time
There’s no way I could pull away

Chorus x2 w/ a key change (Freaking ADORE Key Changes :3)

What do the peoples think? Feedback would be lovely

[Colored Shadows]

Julian,

This is a really beautiful song! You are a very talented writer, and as I would imagine, a talented musician as well! It's extremely sweet that you wrote this about the girl you like. I hope things work out!

[Zentman J]

Thank you! And yeah, I hope so too.