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If it Could Speak - January 10th 2012, 06:47 PM

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Please do not read this if it is going to tempt you to SH. This is a poem I wrote describing what my blood would say if it could speak. I realize now, that nearly everything I wrote were lies I was hearing. I am now finding the truth in my Savior Jesus Christ.

If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"I am the ultimate vulnerability. Here,
exposed
nothing to hide behind.
Here is how real the pain is inside me."

If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"Life's not worth the pain it takes to get better
And I'm not worth it either."

If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"Here is how broken I am inside.
Maybe the scars on the outside will one day reflect the ones on the inside."

If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"Look, I'm still alive.
Feel this? This is real.
I can still feel.
At least the pain means I'm feeling something."

If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"Look, I have control. No matter what anyone says or does, I'm still in control over this."

If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"Look, I could end my life right now if I wanted to.
Just a little deeper and...."

If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"There's no one who genuinely cares.
I'm all alone.
I am completely, totally alone."

If my blood could speak, this is what it would say:
This is how much I hurt
   
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Re: If it Could Speak - January 10th 2012, 07:15 PM

wow. that was amazing! i'd love to read more of your work. thanks for posting.
   
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Re: If it Could Speak - January 10th 2012, 11:48 PM

Wow I loved it!
If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"Life's not worth the pain it takes to get better

And I'm not worth it either."
-This was my favorite part!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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Re: If it Could Speak - January 11th 2012, 01:11 AM

This is really great, I'd love it if you posted more. These two were my favourite parts:

"If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"Look, I have control. No matter what anyone says or does, I'm still in control over this."

If it could speak, this is what it would say:
"Look, I could end my life right now if I wanted to.
Just a little deeper and...."


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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