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January 15th 2012, 01:43 PM
Your love blows through me
Like the wind on a hot summer day Making me say, “What a relief” I feel so good I want to impress you with pretty words That flow together like rivers Words that flow like the warm water which flows over you after a bad day What I would give to be that water! For me to flow over you making you feel renewed Every last drop of me flowing over your beautiful body Loosening each muscle You feel completely relaxed I want to flow over you My love flowing into you As I swim through your thoughts Oh, to dive into your mind! Exploring each of your crevices Until the mystery of you is solved The day when we know everything about each other The good as well as the bad And one can still see the brilliant light emanating from the other’s finger tips And her heart glowing through her skin That will be one of my happiest days Because I will know that I am yours And you will know that you are mine Regardless I love you when nothing goes right, i go left.   |
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January 15th 2012, 02:53 PM
That is very good and beautiful. Great job!
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January 17th 2012, 12:14 AM
This is really wonderful. I liked this the most:
"Your love blows through me Like the wind on a hot summer day" Keep it up! I want to read more. 
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best  Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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