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Water - January 15th 2012, 02:43 PM

Your love blows through me
Like the wind on a hot summer day
Making me say, “What a relief”
I feel so good

I want to impress you with pretty words
That flow together like rivers
Words that flow like the warm water
which flows over you after a bad day

What I would give to be that water!
For me to flow over you making you feel renewed
Every last drop of me flowing over your beautiful body
Loosening each muscle
You feel completely relaxed

I want to flow over you
My love flowing into you
As I swim through your thoughts

Oh, to dive into your mind!
Exploring each of your crevices
Until the mystery of you is solved

The day when we know everything about each other
The good as well as the bad
And one can still see the brilliant light
emanating from the other’s finger tips
And her heart glowing through her skin
That will be one of my happiest days

Because I will know that I am yours
And you will know that you are mine
Regardless
I love you


when nothing goes right, i go left.

   
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Re: Water - January 15th 2012, 02:54 PM

Beautiful, did you write this yourself or found this from somewhere? Either way it's beautiful
   
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Re: Water - January 15th 2012, 03:13 PM

Thank you I did write it myself


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Re: Water - January 15th 2012, 03:53 PM

That is very good and beautiful. Great job!


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Re: Water - January 17th 2012, 01:14 AM

This is really wonderful. I liked this the most:
"Your love blows through me
Like the wind on a hot summer day"
Keep it up! I want to read more.


It's like forgetting the words to your favorite song
You can't believe it
You were always singing along

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