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Moonlight - January 20th 2012, 07:42 AM

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It was a cold night,
Only lit by moonlight,
Every time he touched me a part of me died,
While the inside of me cried,
His touch was foreign,
I froze knowing what was going to happen,
He entered me without a second thought,
Sex from me was all he sought,
He was a pervert,
He didn't care about me or how much I hurt,
I didn't know what to do or say,
For I was his prey,
I just wanted to scream,
It was as if I were in a bad dream,
Where I had no voice,
No choice,
He never threatened me,
But in some ways he controlled my utter being,
So I just laid there in silence,
For one word could have brought violence,
Every second of the rape,
All I wanted was an escape,
For almost the entire time I was frozen; almost lifeless,
Feeling oh so powerless,
Feeling the pain,
Shame,
And everything in between,
Afterwards I felt violated and unclean,
So there I silently wept,
As most of the world slept,
Only us knowing what had happened,
And only I felt the part of my soul that no time could ever mend,
It was a cold night,
Only lit by moonlight,
Many think it's beautiful,
But for me it reminds me of the night I lost a part of my soul,
The night I was robbed of my virginity,
Purity,
And what little was left of my girlhood,
All because of him doing what he knew he could.

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Re: Moonlight - January 21st 2012, 08:06 PM

Keep up the good writing!


   
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Re: Moonlight - January 21st 2012, 08:54 PM

Thanks, Amber.
   
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Re: Moonlight - January 22nd 2012, 02:21 PM

This is a very expressive poem. I really liked it, although I'm sorry if this really happened to you! It's good to express things like this, and writing is a great outlet.

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Re: Moonlight - January 22nd 2012, 10:22 PM

thanks kylie. it really did happen so writings been my outlet for it. i'm glad you liked it.
   
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Re: Moonlight - January 24th 2012, 08:24 PM

This is really good!!!
The words are beautiful.
Though this is a very sad poem, it is still lovely in its own unique and amazing way.
Keep writing!


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Re: Moonlight - January 26th 2012, 06:02 AM

thanks Total Light Storm.
   
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Re: Moonlight - January 26th 2012, 10:36 PM

Wow! It is so amazing! Great job!


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Re: Moonlight - January 26th 2012, 10:46 PM

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Re: Moonlight - January 26th 2012, 10:54 PM

You're really welcome!


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Re: Moonlight - January 27th 2012, 09:26 PM

welll there are talented people here
   
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Re: Moonlight - January 27th 2012, 10:38 PM

This poem is absolutely amazing, as all of your poetry that I have read is. Keep it up.





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Re: Moonlight - January 28th 2012, 08:18 AM

hugs the poem is beautiful and it shows the courage and strength you have
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Re: Moonlight - January 28th 2012, 06:48 PM

thanks brooke, that means a lot.
   
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Re: Moonlight - January 28th 2012, 09:02 PM

I really really liked it!!


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