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I'll be okay...
![]() Outside, huh? ********** Name: Desiree or Dez
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Scared -
January 24th 2012, 09:06 PM
This thread has been labeled as triggering, particularly on the subject of suicide, by the original poster or by a Moderator. The contents of this thread therefore might not be suitable for certain sensitive users. Please take this into consideration before continuing to read.
No more sunshine, no more rain
Nothing to lose and nothing to gain When you're living for the pain Living to die a little at a time Help me, set me free Lying through blood you won't see Crying, just let me be Leave me to die, leave me to bleed You can't see right through me You can't speak right to me I can feel you there but cannot see The person you want me to be I don't know why I'm sad, why I cry What makes me want to die Nothing is right but I can't fly I'm not insane, something's wrong But when I'm on that ledge wanting to jump I can't... I'm scared... Scared I'll live Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best ![]() Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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C'est la vie. ♥
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January 24th 2012, 11:27 PM
This was a pretty intense piece. I can definitely identify with it and it's very well-written. I love the build-up to the fear at the end of the poem!
Keep up the great work.
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I'll be okay...
![]() Outside, huh? ********** Name: Desiree or Dez
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Location: FOR IRAW!!! ...And Connecticut
Posts: 3,760
Join Date: November 16th 2010
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January 25th 2012, 10:16 AM
Thanks you two.
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best ![]() Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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