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January 29th 2012, 02:26 AM
She stands alone across the street staring at the dining room window. She didnt mean to see. She was just going home after a walk and a fight with her family. But she wanted to talk to him. He made her smile in her darkest hour. So she walked in the direction of his home. But passing by, she heard a laughter she knew anywhere. Her face lit up brighter than New York on New Year's Eve. Only to be broken when she saw him kissing the other girl. She forgot her home problem and broke done crying. He noticed her from insde and told the other girl to wait. He ran out the door towards her. But she picked up herself and started to run. He was just getting across the street. She fell from her ankle twisting, but yet she kept going. She dragged herself as he got next to her. Reaching down and trying to grab her hand, he notices her eyes filled with misery and pain. She doesnt say anything to him. She just wanted to get to the church away from him across the street. He looked at her ankle and realized how hurt her bone was. He bent over and picked her up like a baby she tried to talk but her voice was shake. After a bit, she manage to tell him the word church. He took her to her house instead and layed her on the couch. He tried getting her to speak but she looked at her and then left. He walked back home to the other girl while she began to cry in agony.
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If you ever want to talk or something, i am always here. I've been around for a while now. " I TRIED SO HARD, AND GOT SO FAR, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER" -Linkin Park IN MY FEILD OF PAPER FLOWERS, AND CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLIBIES, I LAY INSIDE MYSELF FOR HOURS, AND WATCH MY PURPLE SKIES FLY OVER ME - |
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Music is LOVE. <3
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Re: Heartbreak (mini story) -
January 29th 2012, 02:33 AM
Ouch..
I liked it. But it hit a little close to home. Other than that loved it. |
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I'll be okay...
 Outside, huh? ********** 
Name: Desiree or Dez
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Re: Heartbreak (mini story) -
January 29th 2012, 02:48 AM
This is good, any inspiration?
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best  Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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Re: Heartbreak (mini story) -
January 29th 2012, 02:53 AM
Ciara: thanks, its supposed to be able to connect to people.
Dez: ill tell you later Used to be Misslostintears
If you ever want to talk or something, i am always here. I've been around for a while now. " I TRIED SO HARD, AND GOT SO FAR, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL, BUT IN THE END, IT DOESNT EVEN MATTER" -Linkin Park IN MY FEILD OF PAPER FLOWERS, AND CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLIBIES, I LAY INSIDE MYSELF FOR HOURS, AND WATCH MY PURPLE SKIES FLY OVER ME - |
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I'll be okay...
Outside, huh? **********
Name: Desiree or Dez
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Location: FOR IRAW!!! ...And Connecticut
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Join Date: November 16th 2010
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Re: Heartbreak (mini story) -
January 29th 2012, 03:04 AM
Okay, PM it to me or something.
Sing, the last thing on your mind The last word on your breath I'll be the one to keep you I'll keep you at your best Self Expression Forum Mod 4/23/12 |
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