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Depression. - February 3rd 2012, 04:58 AM

Most recent piece. Can't say I care for it all to much myself, at least as a whole. But I love the last four lines too much to not share.

"Wipes away the tears,
Caused by direct connection with her fears,
Swallows the lump in her throat,
Forcing herself to not choke,
On the words that she finds around,
That attempt to make her drown,
Raises her eyes to the light,
Takes a deep breath, gets ready to fight,
Against the undertow,
Against what life has in stow,
Supressing the thoughts,
Of every hope turned faux,
Pushes away the emotion,
Tries to drown out the commotion,
Rattling around in her head,
As she forces herself out of bed,
This depression she's found herself lost in,
She just can't seem to comprehend when it'll end,
It can't be out run, she can't escape,
Maybe this is just her sickening fate,
A bitter fight with the person in the mirror,
Tooth and claw just to see which side is clearer,
The image cast in darkness, smothered by lies,
Or the image no one else sees, the girl who is strong enough to cry"


♪♫"The mirror only shows
The shell of what's below
You can't go on suffering
The illusion of control
It's time for letting go
You can't go on suffering
And now you know
Now you know"♪♫
'Now You Know' - 2Cents
Things get better.
Always keep fighting.
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Re: Depression. - February 3rd 2012, 05:31 AM

i really like this. good work! hope to read more of your work.
   
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Re: Depression. - February 3rd 2012, 05:40 AM

I really like this! I can see the emotion. Keep writing.


Stay strong. <3


From day one I talked about getting out
But not forgetting about
How all my worst fears are letting out
He said, "Why put a new address on the same old loneliness?"
When breathing just passes the time
Until we all just get old and die
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Re: Depression. - February 5th 2012, 07:11 AM

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i really like this. good work! hope to read more of your work.
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I really like this! I can see the emotion. Keep writing.
Thank you both.


♪♫"The mirror only shows
The shell of what's below
You can't go on suffering
The illusion of control
It's time for letting go
You can't go on suffering
And now you know
Now you know"♪♫
'Now You Know' - 2Cents
Things get better.
Always keep fighting.
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Re: Depression. - February 5th 2012, 10:10 PM

I love it! Great job! Hope to read more.


"There wouldn't be a song called 'You Found Me' had God known'How to Save a Life.'"

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Re: Depression. - February 8th 2012, 08:50 AM

Again. Brilliant. Like I said in another post, and to you countless times, I don't like to say Brilliant. But all of your work is just...brilliant. Fantastic, seriously.
   
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Re: Depression. - February 8th 2012, 08:11 PM

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I love it! Great job! Hope to read more.
Thanks dear (:

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Again. Brilliant. Like I said in another post, and to you countless times, I don't like to say Brilliant. But all of your work is just...brilliant. Fantastic, seriously.
Lmao. Thanks so much Robert. (:


♪♫"The mirror only shows
The shell of what's below
You can't go on suffering
The illusion of control
It's time for letting go
You can't go on suffering
And now you know
Now you know"♪♫
'Now You Know' - 2Cents
Things get better.
Always keep fighting.
❤Feel free to PM/VM, or add me if you ever need a friend, or someone to talk to. I'm online quite often.
Add me on FB <--- apparently this is my creeper face.
   
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