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February 3rd 2012, 04:58 AM
Most recent piece. Can't say I care for it all to much myself, at least as a whole. But I love the last four lines too much to not share.
"Wipes away the tears,
Caused by direct connection with her fears, Swallows the lump in her throat, Forcing herself to not choke, On the words that she finds around, That attempt to make her drown, Raises her eyes to the light, Takes a deep breath, gets ready to fight, Against the undertow, Against what life has in stow, Supressing the thoughts, Of every hope turned faux, Pushes away the emotion, Tries to drown out the commotion, Rattling around in her head, As she forces herself out of bed, This depression she's found herself lost in, She just can't seem to comprehend when it'll end, It can't be out run, she can't escape, Maybe this is just her sickening fate, A bitter fight with the person in the mirror, Tooth and claw just to see which side is clearer, The image cast in darkness, smothered by lies, Or the image no one else sees, the girl who is strong enough to cry" ♪♫"The mirror only shows The shell of what's below You can't go on suffering The illusion of control It's time for letting go You can't go on suffering And now you know Now you know"♪♫ 'Now You Know' - 2Cents Things get better. Always keep fighting. ❤Feel free to PM/VM, or add me if you ever need a friend, or someone to talk to. I'm online quite often.  |
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February 3rd 2012, 05:40 AM
I really like this! I can see the emotion. Keep writing.
Stay strong. <3
From day one I talked about getting out But not forgetting about How all my worst fears are letting out He said, "Why put a new address on the same old loneliness?" When breathing just passes the time Until we all just get old and die |
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February 5th 2012, 07:11 AM
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♪♫"The mirror only shows The shell of what's below You can't go on suffering The illusion of control It's time for letting go You can't go on suffering And now you know Now you know"♪♫ 'Now You Know' - 2Cents Things get better. Always keep fighting. ❤Feel free to PM/VM, or add me if you ever need a friend, or someone to talk to. I'm online quite often. |
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February 5th 2012, 10:10 PM
I love it! Great job! Hope to read more.
There wouldn't be a song called "You Found Me" had God known "How to Save a Life." R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 R.I.P. Patch Herrmann January 29, 2000- Decemeber 6, 2012 R.I.P. Blake Bowman July 17, 2000 -January 21, 2015 |
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February 8th 2012, 08:50 AM
Again. Brilliant. Like I said in another post, and to you countless times, I don't like to say Brilliant. But all of your work is just...brilliant. Fantastic, seriously.
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February 8th 2012, 08:11 PM
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♪♫"The mirror only shows The shell of what's below You can't go on suffering The illusion of control It's time for letting go You can't go on suffering And now you know Now you know"♪♫ 'Now You Know' - 2Cents Things get better. Always keep fighting. ❤Feel free to PM/VM, or add me if you ever need a friend, or someone to talk to. I'm online quite often. |
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