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Her Wish - February 8th 2012, 06:23 PM

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She acts like everything is okay.
Nothing is wrong, nothing is right.
She never sees any light.
Silently she takes out her knife.
One cut, two cuts, three cuts, four.
The pain flows from her vain.
Tears over flow her eyes,
feeling as if she would like to die.
Once more cut, just one cut deeper.
Could make her wish come true
   
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Re: Her Wish - February 8th 2012, 08:47 PM

I really like this because I can definitely relate to what is going on.


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: Her Wish - February 8th 2012, 11:32 PM

Honestly, this poem is do deep. Thanks for writing it. It's so realistic. I really like it. It's one of those poems you read and then stare speechless, waiting for something else to happen, then you realize it's over and you keep sitting there stunned. I'm not just trying to say a whole bunch of words I'm serious.
   
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Re: Her Wish - February 9th 2012, 12:51 AM

I agree with Complete Love completely with everything she wrote, it was simply amazing.
   
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Re: Her Wish - February 13th 2012, 06:43 PM

Thank you, especially Complete. Love I think that is the best coment Iv ever been given
   
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Re: Her Wish - February 13th 2012, 06:48 PM

Short. Sweet. And to the point.

Beautiful.
   
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